Please sign up
or login to post a critique.
LMS: a vampire's love part 1It was a bright and sunny morning in Germany, all of the vampires were sleeping, and Miss sarah, a 15 year old girl who had a crush on one of the vampires, that vampire goes to vampire acadamy also known as the school for little vampires is named fletscher. she has alot of friends and she's also smart.Sarah: AHH! what a great day, tonight i'm going to see the love of my life, FletscherFletscher in his coffin, dreaming) I wonder were my love sarah in, i was going to see her at night timeFletscher and sarah always dream of eachother, they were love at first sight since they met, they visit every night at the school for little vampires, they always kiss eachother good night at the end of their visits. tonight, night time has arrived and the two lovers finally visit again.Fletscher: I wonder where sarah is she was suppost to be here an hour ago, she must be sick or somthing(DOORBELL RINGS) Fletscher: OH! that must be herSarah: HI Fletscher, sorry i'm late, i had to do so