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A vampire love storyVampire love story is about a young vampire named Stoker and a young girl named Lil' miss sarah. they meet in a dark forest with ghosts and other vampires lirk through the night.Stoker: Where am istoker was shocked and a bit curious.Stoker: this is a very creepy forestHe was not alone when he saw.lil' miss sarah: Hello anybody here hellohe saw a young girl named lil'miss sarah and stoker was in a deep love emotion when he saw her beauty.Stoker: hello, Names stokerLil'miss sarah: Sarah but, my friends call me lil'miss sarah for a cute nicknamethe two where talking and then suddenly they fall deeply in love.Lil'miss sarah: wow your so handsomeStoker: your so beautifulStoker and Lil'miss sarah(start to kiss)Stoker and Lil'miss sarah: Wow, your such a good kisserthe two later became boyfriend and girlfriend, and they will soon get engaged and soon be married. They were planning their future with 5 kids and live a really really really good and beautiful life as a vampire famil